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  1. Elyss Koh'inor

    Greetings

    Selvyn I enjoyed your story! Your characters were entertaining and your names for the ship and magical objects are great. I think you could focus on one of the two parts like you said, or make it a little longer to bridge the gap between the two. There's not so much of a gap that you would have...
  2. Elyss Koh'inor

    Greetings

    *Peeks into Ashara's pocket* It's looking nice in there!
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